Spring Dance #Haiku

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April 8, 2022

Spring Dance #Haiku

 

The flower danced

Under the spring rain drops

With violent wind gusts

Thank you for sharing. Happy spring!

17 Comments

  1. Marcia @ Menopausal Mother

    April 29, 2022 at 8:18 am

    This is pretty! I do love springtime so much!

    • lisa

      May 4, 2022 at 2:50 pm

      Thank you, Marcia! Me, too but it still feels like early spring here 😛

  2. Tamara

    April 21, 2022 at 11:56 am

    Lovely imagery. And it sounds just like spring in New England, and I’m sure where you are too. Sorry it took me awhile to get here! Although I know you know why I’m so delayed!

  3. Mabel Kwong

    April 15, 2022 at 4:04 am

    Lovely poem about Spring, Lisa. You described the in-betweeness feeling of the season so succinctly in such a few words. There will be rain, and there will be sunshine. Enjoy the sunshine and flowers. It’s Autumn here in Australia. Not too cold yet here. Hope you are doing well 🙂

    • lisa

      April 15, 2022 at 4:43 pm

      Thank you so much, Mabel. Yes, Spring is unpredictable 🙂 enjoy the mild autumn. It is my favorite season. Always nice to see you here!

  4. DGKaye

    April 11, 2022 at 4:49 pm

    And yet it continued to dance. Beautiful spring poem Lis. <3

    • lisa

      April 11, 2022 at 5:54 pm

      I’m always amazed at that. The delicate flowers dancing in the cold wind and rain. no problem! Thank you, Deb <3

  5. Chrys Fey

    April 11, 2022 at 2:43 pm

    Perfect spring haiku.

    • lisa

      April 11, 2022 at 4:48 pm

      Thank you, Chrys! Hope you’re enjoying some nice spring weather xx

  6. Marie Kléber

    April 11, 2022 at 6:39 am

    Happy Spring Days to you Lisa and thank you for this lovely Haiku.
    Loving it!

    • lisa

      April 11, 2022 at 4:48 pm

      Happy spring days to you, Marie! I will pop in and read more of your poetry that you’re writing for daily challenge!

  7. Balroop Singh

    April 9, 2022 at 8:18 am

    Lovely haiku. Happy spring Lisa! Let’s join the dance!

    • lisa

      April 9, 2022 at 12:32 pm

      Thank you, Balroop! Happy spring and indeed, let’s join the dance–love it!

  8. Jeff

    April 8, 2022 at 7:41 pm

    Sounds like the Spring I’ve experienced in the mountains of SW Virginia.

    • lisa

      April 9, 2022 at 12:31 pm

      Yes? Same here! Lots of rain drops and violent gusts. 🙂

  9. LA CONTESSA

    April 8, 2022 at 10:01 am

    HAPPY SPRING WE NEED SOME GOOD NEWS!!!
    XXX

    • lisa

      April 8, 2022 at 10:06 am

      Happy Spring, LA CONTESSA! We sure do…let’s hope. It is the season of hope and renewal.

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