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My challenge response to Colleen Chesebro’s #Tanka Tuesday poetry challenge; synonyms only. The two words colleen has given for the challenge are fancy and idea. Without using the words but using only their synonyms, I have written a Tanka poem:

One Bite

I had a notion
To cook a grandiose meal
For my ex-lover
One bite of lace-like latkes and
He would aim to undress me

-LT

Feel free to join in the challenge. Have fun with words.

Have you ever cooked for someone with the idea of seduction?

22 Comments

  1. Tamara

    April 21, 2020 at 10:05 am

    Ohh.. that’s so descriptive. Lace-like! I love latkes and I love lace-like foods.. like those amazing cookies at Trader Joe’s..
    I once made a Snicker’s Pie for a boy. He liked it.

    • lisa

      April 21, 2020 at 3:12 pm

      🙂 Thank you, Tamara! I have never made latkes. I’ll have to try. Well, well…a Snicker’s Pie. Nice! Of course he liked it. I want a snickers pie now. Been craving sugar lately. Not sure if it’s something to do with quarantine. 😛

  2. David Ellis

    April 20, 2020 at 6:33 pm

    Mmmmm delicious poem! Food certainly does hit the spot every time 🙂

    • lisa

      April 20, 2020 at 6:39 pm

      Ha. Thank you, David. Glad to hear it 😀

  3. Suzanne @ The Bookish Libra

    April 19, 2020 at 5:14 pm

    Love the poem. Such a fun idea for a challenge.

    • lisa

      April 20, 2020 at 6:38 pm

      Thank you, Suzanne 🙂 It was a fun challenge.

  4. Amy Aed

    April 18, 2020 at 6:13 am

    I love this idea, and really like the idea of that Tanka haha.

    How is the quarantine treating you? I hope you are well!

    amy x wandering-everywhere.com

    • lisa

      April 18, 2020 at 9:20 am

      Haha, thank you, Amy. Quarantine hasn’t been terrible. Can’t complain. How about you? <3

  5. Marcia @ Menopausal Mother

    April 17, 2020 at 8:57 am

    Sounds like I need to learn how to make latkes!!

    • lisa

      April 17, 2020 at 9:45 am

      :p 😛 :p Yes! xx

  6. ShootingStarsMag

    April 16, 2020 at 1:35 pm

    Love it! What a fun way to write a poem.

    -Lauren

    • lisa

      April 16, 2020 at 6:43 pm

      Thanks, Lauren. It was a brain teaser 😀

  7. Jeff

    April 16, 2020 at 1:33 pm

    Nice poem, but I was wondering what were in those latkes 🙂 I’m thinking I might not be hungry.

    • lisa

      April 16, 2020 at 2:28 pm

      Ha! Nothing untoward, Jeff. They just taste a-m-a-z-i-n-g. The woman knows what he likes.

  8. Balroop Singh

    April 15, 2020 at 10:17 pm

    Well-done Lisa, you seem to be in a kind mood with an ex!! It would be better to cook eels for the one who chooses to be an ex 🙂 unless you still care for his seduction. I never would. …as slippery as an eel fits them well.

    • lisa

      April 15, 2020 at 10:59 pm

      Haha! well said, Balroop. Although an ex-lover is not to be mistaken for an ex-husband… 😛 😀 😉

      Slippery as an eel, very apt.

  9. DGKaye

    April 15, 2020 at 5:55 pm

    Well done! I hope to jump in next week. <3

    • lisa

      April 15, 2020 at 8:14 pm

      Thank you! I wasn’t sure if I should put this under ‘humor’ as well. My hubs read it and laughed out loud.

  10. Colleen

    April 15, 2020 at 5:52 pm

    Hi, Lisa! I love your Tanka! Well done! 😂❤️

    • lisa

      April 15, 2020 at 8:15 pm

      Thanks, Colleen! So glad you’re LOL’ing. I meant it in fun. But yeah, food does go straight to a man’s heart…or libido? Haha!!

  11. DGKaye

    April 15, 2020 at 5:19 pm

    That was one tasty Tanka, lol. Well done Lis. I really have to get back into these challenges. Maybe next week. <3
    Btw, wondering if you see my tweets. I just noticed when I share your post it doesn't tag yur @name at the end? xx

    • lisa

      April 15, 2020 at 5:52 pm

      Thanks, Deb. 😉 I hardly do challenges. This is only my second one. Good for my brain though.
      Oh, that’s weird. My username should be at the end of the tweet but I’ll look into. Thanks for sharing my post!! xx

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