My Autumn

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September 5, 2019
My Autumn

My Autumn

No more laissez-faire

Sway of the hips

For summer’s long gone

And with it our swagger

Autumn, she lays bare

The branches of our past

Our secrets dangling there

Of birch and bruises

Boots for kicking

The gilded leaves whispering 

“Cold is coming”

But for the briefest moment,

What glitters is gold

~ Lisa

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How are you feeling about the change in seasons?

40 Comments

  1. Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life.

    October 21, 2019 at 1:24 am

    Lovely Lisa

    • lisa

      October 21, 2019 at 2:16 pm

      Thank you, Sally 🙂

  2. Vishnu

    October 5, 2019 at 11:39 pm

    Not the biggest fan …of this season but you’re making a strong case for it Lisa!

    • lisa

      October 9, 2019 at 2:24 pm

      My work is done then. 😁 nice to see you Vishnu.

  3. Kimberly

    September 20, 2019 at 4:22 am

    That is such a beautiful poem Lisa! Truly. You really captured the feel of Autumn – I’m not a fan of at all. Burrrrr…cold is coming that is for damn sure. Keep it Mother Nature!. HAHAH!

    • lisa

      September 21, 2019 at 2:22 am

      Thank you, Kim! 😀 I’ve been more a fan of autumn since I have left the prairie winters behind. I used to get sad at the approach of autumn, knowing the deep freeze was imminent. West coast winters have allowed me to revel in autumn.
      I guess I’m saying, I get your position on mother nature keeping it away—hahaha. Your winters are cold and the darkness is so hard…eek. Let’s enjoy the colors while they’re here.

  4. Jess @UsedYorkCity

    September 16, 2019 at 8:26 am

    What a beautiful poem, Lisa! I’ll always cherish summer as my very favorite season of all, but try to embrace sweater weather by putting things on the calendar that we look forward to–pumpkin picking, hot chocolate making, and “leaf foraging” at the park. But still…I sure do miss that sweet summertime weather!;-)

    • lisa

      September 18, 2019 at 9:29 am

      Summer is luxuriously delicious. The warm, sunny mornings when the sky is already bright blue…now it’s raining. No, it’s POURING. Sigh. I love your list of autumn activities. It does help to have traditions. I bet Augusten delights in those fall rituals.

  5. Chrys Fey

    September 16, 2019 at 7:47 am

    I get my swagger in autumn. 😉
    I loved your poem. You should share more of them here.

    • lisa

      September 18, 2019 at 9:27 am

      Ah, yes, that’s awesome, Chrys! Thank you so much for your encouragement.

  6. Suzanne @ The Bookish Libra

    September 15, 2019 at 9:27 am

    Nicely written. I love the change of seasons when winter is changing to spring and especially when summer is changing to fall because fall is my favorite time of year.

    • lisa

      September 15, 2019 at 10:29 pm

      Thanks, Suzanne. You like Pumpkin spice latte? I haven’t had one yet but it’s getting colder here so it’s tempting.

      • Suzanne @ The Bookish Libra

        October 20, 2019 at 8:30 am

        I know people like to make fun of the PSL craze, but I do enjoy the lattes. I also really enjoy warm spiced apple cider. Both of those drinks just scream autumn to me. 🙂

        • lisa

          October 21, 2019 at 2:18 pm

          Warm apple cider always reminds me of Halloween. I do love anything apple. Still have to get a PSL!!

  7. Marcia @ Menopausal Mother

    September 13, 2019 at 7:20 pm

    Lovely poem—“of birch and bruises…” beautiful, Lisa!

    • lisa

      September 14, 2019 at 9:35 am

      Thank you, Marcia! <3 😀

  8. Bette Stevens

    September 11, 2019 at 6:07 pm

    Beautiful…

    • lisa

      September 12, 2019 at 9:02 am

      Thank you, Bette! 🙂

      • Bette Stevens

        September 12, 2019 at 4:45 pm

        You’re welcome, Lisa! Have a beautiful weekend.

        • lisa

          September 13, 2019 at 7:41 am

          You too, Bette. Thanks.

  9. Christine Carter

    September 10, 2019 at 2:26 pm

    That is some beautiful poetry, Lisa! I loved it so much. Since it’s in the 90’s this week, I have yet to feel any change in seasons just yet!

    I LOVE fall. It’s so very nostalgic to me. I especially love walking in the fall. Once it gets really cold, I tend to wimp out and not go walking anymore- so I cherish my ‘final days of walking’ as the season turns… to winter. (Yuck. I’m not a winter girl!)

    • lisa

      September 11, 2019 at 8:13 am

      Thank you, Chris! I don’t often share my poetry but I think—why not? It’s still warm here, too. I love the fall, too. I tend to walk/jog outside all year, rain or shine. It’s hard to get motivated some rainy days, but once I’m out there it feels awesome. Enjoy your fall walks, Chris!

  10. Charlotte

    September 9, 2019 at 7:20 am

    What a beautiful poem, Lisa <3 There's always something so raw and unforgiving about Autumn, right? It's my favorite time of year; always so invigorating, the way the air smells and how alive I feel in these fall months.

    Hope you had a great weekend, my sweet! XO

    • lisa

      September 9, 2019 at 11:40 am

      Thanks, Charlotte. 🙂 Yes, I suppose it’s back to the impending cold that we know is coming. That’s true and I think it is our old habit of ‘back to school’ season that give us that feelin of renewal.

  11. Jeri

    September 8, 2019 at 6:53 pm

    I’m especially grateful for the change of seasons this year because my new rental only has a small window AC unit upstairs and it’s not very effective! At least it’s not overly hot here for too long, but still.

    • lisa

      September 9, 2019 at 11:37 am

      Hi Jeri, I hope your move went well and hope we’ll hear more about it at your blog. Hope the AC unit is good to get you through these last couple of weeks. It can either be hot or who knows? Anything during the change of seasons. Foggy.

  12. Tamara

    September 6, 2019 at 6:43 am

    My goodness, Lisa, this should be in a book.
    Or framed. No doubt.

    • lisa

      September 7, 2019 at 3:41 pm

      Aw, thank you, Tamara! <3 <3 <3

  13. Marie Kléber

    September 6, 2019 at 5:56 am

    I am glad you are sharing your poetry Lisa – it’s really nice.
    I love autumn, its colors, the fresh air and still some sun. I love the atmosphere, the comfort of home and hot chocolate at tea time…

    Have a lovely day and happy new season to come

    • lisa

      September 7, 2019 at 3:40 pm

      Thank you, Marie. Me, too. Love those autumn-y things!

  14. Balroop Singh

    September 5, 2019 at 6:36 pm

    Each season has its own charm and you have captured it beautifully Lisa. Bare branches do reveal all that was hidden there, evoking a thousand memories. I love Autumn for the hues it paints all around us besides providing relief from summer days. May your Autumn be as blissful as the swagger of summer.

    • lisa

      September 5, 2019 at 7:11 pm

      Thank you, Balroop. Me, too. I love the color nature shows us this time of year. Well not for a few weeks yet. We still have the beautiful flowers blooming. I also love the cooler evenings and mornings. It is a relief from the heat.

  15. Jane Thrive

    September 5, 2019 at 5:47 pm

    I feel you! Beautiful poem, Lisa <3

    p.s. this relates to my latest blog post…and the meme i found… "August is like the Sunday to Summer…" LOL

    • lisa

      September 5, 2019 at 7:09 pm

      Aw, thank you Jane! Oh, that’s so true about August. And once that month is gone it really feels our fling is over. I’ll pop over to read!

  16. DGKaye

    September 5, 2019 at 4:49 pm

    I’m back.I don’t see any reply from you, lol. Let’s see if I get a comment back 🙂

    • lisa

      September 5, 2019 at 6:42 pm

      Hey, thanks Deb.

      • DGKaye

        September 7, 2019 at 6:13 pm

        Yes it works! Thanks Lis <3

        • lisa

          September 7, 2019 at 6:22 pm

          yay!

  17. DGKaye

    September 5, 2019 at 2:23 pm

    Beautifully told Lis. And yup, I see the boots traded in for the flip flops LOL 🙂 x PS just so you know, I never receive replies back from you, and your blog isn’t the only one. 🙁

    • lisa

      September 5, 2019 at 6:43 pm

      Thanks, Deb and yes, I always look forward to getting back into my boots LOL.

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